i will like to make another phrase with sanchari's lines
And when its the second time , dont just come out and feel free , it can hurt you sometimes , so be careful and think , is it to live or die , the answer is yours to think .
My voyage is complete, so I stop and sigh, With a smile on my face and a tear in my eye, The story of my life, My agony, my strife, My wish to die, Could there be a bigger lie??
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back after a long time .... gosh!!!!!
When you know it's a lie
Don't just give up and die
Come on face the sunshine
Let it warm, not hurt you
For the first time..
i will like to make another phrase with sanchari's lines
And when its the second time ,
dont just come out and feel free ,
it can hurt you sometimes ,
so be careful and think ,
is it to live or die ,
the answer is yours to think .
karan
hey jessica
ya i know you where u might not know me i am an afgji pass out to i was a year juniour to you passed out this year
so if u have time check out my blog too
its
www.karansmusic.blogspot.com
My voyage is complete, so I stop and sigh,
With a smile on my face and a tear in my eye,
The story of my life,
My agony, my strife,
My wish to die,
Could there be a bigger lie??
dont know y i just posted tht...but wat the heck!
exactly !!! ..... thanks for visitin !!!!!!
thought provoking...
nicely written
whoa man too kewl i say ! me back to blogging after ages as well :)
a lil more meat, a couple of catchy beats, and uve got a song !
you! write a new entry! :p
loss of creativity phase ;)... not tht i had muchof it though!!!...!!!!lolz!!
Take out some time
to read this above rhyme
its speaks of thoughts in my mind
as i think of the answers i cant find
I wonder this has happened to you
or are the above thoughts ridiculously untrue
My head above gt muddled with 2 much thoughts
If only the true answers were taught
I wana Give every person relief
But How Can I as my Own life causes me so much grief...
I m just D.N.M
Dumb, Numb and Mumb.
I think that was ok...
but a good one..I mean yours...not mine
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